Making great progress my man. The only thing that i dont like is the cast shadow on your OC's neck. It looks unfinished and misplaced.
If the light source is to the right, the cast shadow should move to the right as well, not straight down the middle. Also, considering the fact your OC's head is gigantic and round it would leave a larger cast shadow than would a regular human head.
If the light source is to the right, the cast shadow should move to the right as well, not straight down the middle. Also, considering the fact your OC's head is gigantic and round it would leave a larger cast shadow than would a regular human head.